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The Life of:

Beatrice "Tris" Prior

 

 

 

     

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

     From my childhood start, I've always doubted about what my future would be. To start, my childhood is really a big blurry memory. I have a hard time recalling my life before I was 16. All I remember is the fact that I never knew where did I belong, who I wanted to be and what faction was I supposed to join. The big question  always was, who am I?

 

     The day of mi aptitude test finally arrived, I remember being nervous in some way but relieved in another. Never did I think that this test will make me doubt even more. The fact is I've always trusted the test to give me the answer to my life-long question, where did I belong? Arriving at the testing room, I met my manager. Her name was Tori, from Dauntless, and if something I thank is that she was my test manager. After taking the test, my results were inconclusive - meaning that I did not belong to a certain faction - making me divergent. Divergent people are seen as a threat to society and are put to death, but Tori gave me the chance to keep living.

 

     She covered my test results and wrote that Abnegation was my final outcome. The day of the Choosing Ceremony, well, everything was just upside down. No test results, no help, no nothing besides my instinct. The safe choice obviously will be Abnegation, but my heart took me to Dauntless. Leaving my family behind, but my opportunity to start my own life. The first thing done was changing my name, previously known as Beatrice; now known as Tris. The truth is I suffered my first weeks in my faction. Those physical tests were hard, I almost became faction less, but I managed to overcome it. Huge part thanks to my now lover, Four.

 

    When reaching the mental stage of training, I started dominating it. Let's just say I had an advantage over each other competitor. What I did not know is that my future was in trouble. Days passed before I finally admitted to Four I was divergent, and he guided me to the proper way of completing the exam. "Do it as a Dauntless, not as a divergent" he said. Days, weeks of hard practice were fulfilled when my testing date finally came, and I passed it. 

 

    I now was both part of the faction, and our society. That did not mean I followed their principles. The day my family was attacked I chose them before the factions. Unfortunately I lost my mother, but I believe that defending both my family, my society, and our faction system was worth it. Although now I'm trapped, my secret and Four's secret has been revealed, and we have to make our own future.

Beatrice "Tris" Prior

Autobiagrophy

Personal Diary 

Revealed

Personal Letter

Beatrice Prior

Dauntless

November 19

 

     Dear Caleb, 

 

     Brother, I write to you with concern, fear. Rumors are spread through the city that Erudite is overthrowing Abnegation, and I'm worried for both mom and dad. First of all, I want to talk about my decision of joining the Dauntless faction. We both know brother, that my job was never to serve the people, it's not just what I'm supposed to be. I wanted to be free, to be brave, to be myself. Here is Dauntless - even though I'm having a really hard time adapting - I feel I'm living my own life, that I'm being myself. Caleb, I even changed my own name to Tris.

 

     The most important part, is that I'm being myself. Neither a robot for the faction nor a rebel against society, myself. My advice is seek inside you, don't let the aptitude test nor the faction control your mind. We are who we want to be Caleb, not what they tell us to be. I admire you brother, I've always considered you to be the best possible leader you can. Seek greatness and succeed in every aspect of life.

 

     Going back to topic, our parents are in danger. I miss you Caleb, as much as I miss them. We need to take care of each other as they took care of us when we were young. "Faction before family," don't be foolish Caleb, follow what you think it's right not what you faction tells you. I know your Abnegation now, I know that they might have brainwashed your opinion, but with my heart I ask you to never forget who made us who we are. Don't betray your own blood, brother.

 

     Both of our parents have given us everything to succeed in life, and now they need our help. The illusion of factions and the hunt for diver gents have blinded our own society. Abnegation has build a sense of fear between our own people. I do consider myself to be part of Dauntless, but I also consider myself to be a Prior. My blood makes me who I am, and it makes you who you are. Betraying your own family won't be the solution to the problems Caleb. I love you and miss you so much.

 

                                                                           With concern, 

                                                                                          Tris

November 19

 

     Dear diary,

 

     Tomorrow is the final test, I am prepared? Do I really belong to Dauntless, or is my test result going to chase me the rest of my life. Coming clean, I believe I'm prepared to succeed. Four has taught me the tools and strategies I need to get the perfect test result. Even my mother told me, it has been done. Wait, is my mother divergent as well? Is this why she came to talk to me about my decision? Is this why Erudite acuses Abnegation of saving divergent people? Well, there is no time to find answers to this questions, or even to think about questions. Do I have what it takes to succeed? Am I good enough? Why do I seem to believe I don't have what it takes, when probably the best Dauntless member has mentored me. This just brings memories back, all my life I doubted about who I was supposed to be. All my life I believed my test results will bring this doubt to an end, but it made everything just impossibly hard.

 

     Am I meant to be different? Am I meant to be a failure? Why is being different such a big crime? Coming close to the big moment, I seem to have more questions than faith in myself, but why has the world made me divergent? Why me? Why not Caleb? Well, the fact is I have to face the truth, and throughout my whole life I'm going to hide what I truly am. I was born different, I was born committing a crime. It just seemed perfect, you know? I tried my hardest, I got into Dauntless faction almost doing the impossible. When it came to mental tests, I  just saw it as way to easy. I now have learned that I'm mentally stronger than anyone present in that testing room. So, why are we being hunted? Why aren't we ruling society as it is? At least, we have a little bit of each faction inside us.

 

     Coming close to the ceremony, if anyone gets the chance to read this, learn that I have given my all. I'm divergent, I'm different, but I'm not a threat. I always knew that my society was important, I just feel that every human principal has been taken away from us. "Faction before family," why? Isn't that stupid? Well, no time to try and fight society, cause now I have to learn to live like it, act like it, and hide my stupid secret throughout the whole test. Good luck to myself, I know I can pass that stupid test.

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